- Focus on my use of punctuation and continuously look over my essay and see if it makes sense
- Use more statistics to back up my opinions/ argument
- Do not focus too much on my linked production, only state the how it my investigation will help
- Talk more about on and off screen representation
Nest Best Steps
-Focus more on wider context
- Cover other platforms
- Use more book research
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